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I walked into the house and immediately felt at home. The walls had long cracks from the ceiling to the floor, the wallpaper was awful, and the stairs were rotten, but I could see what it could be. Besides that, it really was my home. I was born and raised there, and I immediately felt a lightness ripple through my body. Why had I stayed away for so long? Stupid pride, that was why. Like many kids who grow up in Anywhere Podunk, USA, I couldn’t wait to see this ramshackle house and town shrink into oblivion in my rear view mirror and join the real world in a big, bustling city. I clawed my way through law school, graduated with honors, passed the bar exam on my first try, and was hired at the prestigious Pritchard, Pritchard & Weiss LTD.

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Monique
Monique

Sorry this is so short. I’m on vacation and writing on my iPad. Two or three times I wrote a bunch that didn’t get saved. So frustrating! So, for this time, I’m giving up.

KG
Karen Gargiulo

I like it! How frustrating that your others didn't get saved, but this makes me curious about where it will go. I hope you at to it at some point. I want to know more about someone who grew up in Anywhere Podunk, USA! :)

Savannah Hollow Horn Bear
Savannah Hollow Horn Bear

I appreciate your commitment to get a story in 🥰

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