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Finish this opener

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“I walked into the house and immediately felt at home. The walls had long cracks from the ceiling to the floor, the wallpaper was awful, and the stairs were rotten, but I could see what it could be. Besides“ Begin your story with the quoted text and see where it takes you. Someone already did the hard part of figuring out how to start (not me, it’s from a book [thanks Karen])!

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I walked into the house and immediately felt at home. The walls had long cracks from the ceiling to the floor, the wallpaper was awful, and the stairs were rotten, but I could see what it could be. Besides that, it really was my home. I was born and raised there, and I immediately felt a lightness ripple through my body. Why had I stayed away for so long? Stupid pride, that was why. Like many kids who grow up in Anywhere Podunk, USA, I couldn’t wait to see this ramshackle house and town shrink into oblivion in my rear view mirror and join the real world in a big, bustling city. I clawed my way through law school, graduated with honors, passed the bar exam on my first try, and was hired at the prestigious Pritchard, Pritchard & Weiss LTD.

I walked into the house and immediately felt at home. The walls had long cracks from the ceiling to the floor, the wallpaper was awful, and the stairs were rotten, but I could see what it could be. Besides, I couldn’t exactly look a gift horse in the mouth. This was more than a step up for me, to say the least. Even if I could only call this place home for a few days, I would consider it a win. Running water? Hell yeah! An old, bare mattress on the floor? Yes, please! A few cans of barely expired albacore tuna? You bet. I’d be living like a queen compared to my recent dwellings.

 

I pushed the crooked front door closed. It creaked in protest, along with my fatigued muscles. A grey card table chair from a bygone era stood on the other side of the entryway. It caught my attention. I slid it across the warped, avocado-green linoleum floor and leaned it under the doorknob as a makeshift lock.

 

With careful steps, I padded up the termite-ridden stairway. A few steps down the hall, a smudged door led into a bathroom with a disgusting little sink that went drip drip drip. The cabinet doors, askew, hung open to empty shelves. The toilet was missing its seat, and its tank lid lay broken on the dirt-smudged floor.

 

But abandoned bathroom did display a rusty old claw tub. An upgrade to the dirty public park sink that I’d last “bathed” in. I turned the hot and cold faucets on, letting the brown water run until it ran more or less clear. I longed to plunge in and submerge myself.

 

My tattered jeans practically fell apart as I peeled them from my aching body.

Tears finally formed in my eyes as anger began to boil up through my chest. I sighed and crossed my hands and gripping the bottom hem, lifting it over my head and releasing it from shaking fists onto the vanity counter.

 

I stood before the vanity sink, trembling. Slowly, I lifted my downturned chin and forced myself to look into the cracked mirror. Somehow, despite what I’d just been through, I wasn’t prepared for what I saw. My bloodshot blue eyes went wide, shock tingling through me, like thousands of tiny pinpricks. I felt the cruel reminder that my greasy blonde hair had not seen shampoo in who knows how long. Layers of dirt hid the freckles on my fair skin. But there was no camouflaging the swollen, black-and-blue lump on my forehead.

 

A quick glance around the small bathroom revealed a travel-size sliver of what was once Dove bar soap, stuck to the edge of the tub. Beggers can’t be choosers, but it would seem I’d have to choose between washing the filth from my clothes or scouring the grime from my body. I opted for washing myself, then using the dirty, but soapy, water to soak my clothes before rinsing the hell out of them. Maybe there would be some kind of left-behind towel in a cabinet down the hall. If not, I’d have to settle for naked and wet until my only clothes dried on the splintery banister. Whoever found this house before me clearly helped themselves to any appliances. There were none.

 

[I opted to turn this story in by the deadline over giving it a proper conclusion. I would love any ideas on where you think the story might go! Please let me know in the comments.]

I walked into the house and immediately felt at home. The walls had long cracks from the ceiling to the floor, the wallpaper was awful, and the stairs were rotten, but I could see what it could be. Besides the house being completely uninhabitable, I decided that this would be my new home. For now, at least.

Three sweet old Christian ladies day tripping from Pasadena gave me a ride to the outskirts of the mostly abandoned town of Bombay Beach. I wouldn’t have minded walking the 20 miles to get here, but their enthusiasm was impossible to say no to when they offered. The women chatted about how impressive Salvation Mountain had been while the two not at the wheel hunched over the crochet projects in their laps. “I didn’t make it, but I contributed a lot to it!” I informed them. “He couldn’t adorn that whole mountain without inspiration from me!” The lady in the back seat next to me patted my knee. “That’s wonderful, dear.” She cooed in a way that was supportive, yet laced with a tone of doubt. She must have thought the guys devotion to God would be enough to fuel a project like that. Before we knew it, it was time for me to exit their vehicle and wave as they pulled back out into the main road.

The town was eerie and still. It possessed a sense of endless possibility because of the evident lack of people and the abundance of unsanctioned art installations and graffiti. The few people who chose to live here mostly inhabited rundown mobile homes and RVs. You could see what this place used to be though. In its glory days, it had been vibrant waterfront destination, dredged in the optimism of the 60’s, and full of vacationing families and couples. As the Salton Sea became hazardous and unappealing, the communities surrounding it shriveled. Leaving only a decrepit shell of what once was a thriving community. There were only two kinds of people who lived here now: the folks who refused to leave and the ones craving an alternative lifestyle. The alternative ones were oddballs drawn to the area by Slab City and the promise of a lawless, uninterrupted existence without the pressures of modern society. Those weird-o’s are why I chose to exist here. Those kind of people were full of unburdened creativity.

I have spent years in this desert. In all those years, I have always been satiated. It shocks people when they learn food isn’t required for my existence. I am sustained by ingesting the emotions left behind by creators in their work, though I don’t look any different from you. Others like me tend to prefer the fine dining experience of structured fine arts in museums and architecture. But not me. I revel in the wild gaminess of guerrilla art, trash made into sculptures, and mountains turned to monuments. The kind of creative expression I crave can’t be taught, it’s intrinsic.

Don’t worry. It’s really starting to sound like all I do is vacuum the meaning out of the work I find and leave it ruined. I follow a strict Leave No Trace art foraging method. That means once I’ve gotten my hands on all those savory emotions, you won’t be able to detect any difference. In fact, anyone can reimbue the emptied art by feeling whatever emotions the art brings out of them. My food chain is renewable. I can admit it’s awesome! But it gets even better. Have you wondered about the “waste” I produce? That’s a terrible word to describe it because it’s the best part! I digest it all down into new inspiration to redistribute wherever and to whoever I want. So yeah, you kind of CAN thank me for Salvation Mountain.

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